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haunted / place / That / is

Fear / the / ghosts / not

she / Cos / running / sent / them



surface / She / the / beneath / sleeps

the / with / Consorting / serpents

She / a / purpose / strikes / without



A / dark / face / a / corridor / in

beautiful / Deceptively

you / She's / watching

She's / everything / in / do / you

Her / so / it / kiss / tastes / sweet

a / left / But / me / lethargy / with

couldn't / shake, / I / grave / made / a / I / mistake



gave / it / want / my / didn't / heart, / I / she / her

anyway / and / put / a / spell / Took / dark / on / it / it

the / Since / then / haven't / been / same / I

Needed / victim / a / she / and / it / got

with / in / stop / to / her / me / Took / song, / it / powerless

her / Some / don't / dare / men / name / speak / to



She / picked / my / decline / from / up / me

wounds / Healed / and / love / wine / my / with

and / Dosed / my / up / closed / eyes / me

taste / poison / of / A

I / desired / She / all / gave / that / me

the / angel / Sung / choirs / of / songs

and / Preached / and / fire / me / burning / the / left / of / death / words



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same / haven't / been / the / then / Since / I

it / victim / Needed / got / she / a / and

me / in / powerless / her / it / with / stop / song, / Took / to

don't / men / dare / speak / her / Some / name / to



the / She / beneath / sleeps / surface

serpents / Consorting / the / with

strikes / She / without / purpose / a


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